I think perhaps the no comments may be on account of the typos, especially the title.
Run a spell check, there are some glaring errors.
I'm presuming you are a new writer, brimming with enthusiasm, this shows, with some intriguing imagery:
"swamped futures spitting out candy"
and some great lines:
"and stresful, would such a small sound be"
an example of inversion working well, in my opinion.