Antcliff wrote:Okay, that is two votes 'gainst my fun 'r (Thelonious Monk in head perhaps). It had better go..along with those commas Ros. Thanks both.
Antcliff wrote:I have modified "spread a scent" to "play a scent". Does anybody think this is better/worse/just the same?
twoleftfeet wrote:- I can't help feeling that "thing" is not quite right.
How about "the last touch is yours" ?
- yes, I know it's ambiguous but the ambiguity is kinda growing on me and adds to the lurv.
Macavity wrote:hi Seth
'play' is smoother and more poetic, 'spread' is peculiar and more earthy - me being me naturally prefers the latter
play/tuned are more obvious
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