Hi BenJohnson. Many thanks and sorry about vanishing the first time! I did post two versions originally with different line breaks because I couldn't make my mind up but for some reason this arrangement just felt right. I'm still pondering the eggshell issue, so thanks for letting me know about that. Happy to hear you enjoyed it too.
Hi Oskar and thank you for the encouragement and the friendly welcome. LIve long and prosper! (is that the right saying?)
Hi John Lott and thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it
Hi NIcky. I wondered too about those single lines. Still do! I just kept playing around with it and kept coming back to leaving them that way. I don't know if maybe it does create a kind of symmetry between the spaceship and the clean kitchen. (Some people's kitchens do remind me of spaceships sometimes.) Or maybe I just wanted to upset the order a bit. Thanks for noticing, it does show me that my doubts are not completely random, which they sometimes feel. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying.
Hi Nash. Well thank you. This is most encouraging.
Hi Moth. Thanks so much for the nudge to post it again
Glad you liked this little bit of craziness, both times. Maybe I will go and clean my kitchen now!