Very clever set of lines Bodkin, and a tough set of letters you have presented to work with. I'm glad you stuck to using letters only
You lay amongst orange gourds
mischievously raising the frayed hem
of your faded denim skirt
exposing the length of your thighs.
No other thought to dispose of
entered my mind besides
uncovering the heat of your day.
You gasped when a glossy ladybird
nearly crawled into my eye
distracting me, for only a moment.
I just got beat by a few minutes while working on Bodkin's set of letters by Paisley's post
I'll not put letters up as there is already a set that has not been worked with.
Paisley, I enjoyed your lines, a great variation of elements, the last line is really strong.