The reckoning

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Re: The reckoning

Post by Antcliff » Wed May 11, 2016 6:00 pm

Delighted to see Pauline's excellent poem in Features!


Hazoo! Well deserved.


Seth
We fray into the future, rarely wrought
Save in the tapestries of afterthought.
Richard Wilbur

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Re: The reckoning

Post by Suzanne » Thu May 12, 2016 6:35 am

Wonderful poem, pauline!

Powerful and light at the same time. Excellent voice control throughout.

Happy to support it as a feature!
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Re: The reckoning

Post by k-j » Thu May 12, 2016 4:09 pm

Excellent poem.
fine words butter no parsnips

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Re: The reckoning

Post by Suzanne » Thu Nov 01, 2018 8:28 am

Pauline,

This is still fantastic. Takes my breath away.
Did it get published? do it. Send it.

So rich. I think it's alive.


Warmly,
Suzanne

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