Congratulations to David on his winning poem

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Congratulations to David on his winning poem

Post by Macavity » Thu Nov 14, 2019 10:11 pm



This poem by David was the winning poem of the Poetry Map of the Isle of Man.

https://www.culturevannin.im/poetry_map.html#poetry_map

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Re: Congratulations to David on his winning poem

Post by Sid » Thu Nov 14, 2019 10:30 pm

Congratulations David fantastic result!
Like the imprint left, an effect on your being - beautiful, wonderful, succinct.

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Re: Congratulations to David on his winning poem

Post by Perry » Fri Nov 15, 2019 5:10 am

I don't have sound on my computer. Is it posted somewhere as a text poem?
If I don't critique your poem, it is probably because I don't understand it.

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Re: Congratulations to David on his winning poem

Post by Macavity » Fri Nov 15, 2019 5:58 am

The poem is listed in the index on the second link Perry, this one

https://www.culturevannin.im/poetry_map.html#poetry_map

It is called Alleluia

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Re: Congratulations to David on his winning poem

Post by Perry » Fri Nov 15, 2019 6:44 am

My bad.
If I don't critique your poem, it is probably because I don't understand it.

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