The Poetry Shed (1)

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The Poetry Shed (1)

Post by Macavity » Mon Oct 28, 2019 6:23 am

I have one appearing here:

https://abegailmorley.wordpress.com/2019/10/27/pippin-by-phil-wood/

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Re: The Poetry Shed (1)

Post by Firebird » Mon Oct 28, 2019 7:38 am

Lovely short Mac.

‘She shivers in whispers’ is great phrasing and an arresting image. Good stuff.

Many congrats!

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Re: The Poetry Shed (1)

Post by Macavity » Mon Oct 28, 2019 1:29 pm

Thanks Tristan. The whole is the poem, but often it is a line/phrase which stays with the reader.

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