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Posted: Sat Aug 24, 2019 2:41 pm
I have a poem - Rover - in the forthcoming issue 20 of Lighthouse Literary Journal. Chuffed to bits.
Thanks for the help, all.
Posted: Sat Aug 24, 2019 2:48 pm
Well done, Luke! Lighthouse is a good thing to be in.
I've moved it into Finishing touch, just to be safe - here: http://www.poetsgraves.co.uk/forum/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=24040&hilit=rover - in case anyone wants to read it now.
Posted: Sat Aug 24, 2019 4:03 pm
Posted: Sat Aug 24, 2019 6:00 pm
Actually, I see now that I didn't notice this poem when it first landed (sorry!) here. It's very good. I only wonder why you chose Aldrin rather than the better known - and slightly more pioneering - Armstrong.
Geoff said It has a kind of "morning has broken,like the first morning" vibe - exactly. I completely get that.
Posted: Sat Aug 24, 2019 9:31 pm
Well done Luke. Nice to see the stonechats having an airing!
all the best
Posted: Sun Aug 25, 2019 4:52 pm
Many congrats Luke. I’ve just read the poem and it’s excellent. Well deserved of publication in a great magazine.
Posted: Mon Aug 26, 2019 8:37 am
Thanks Mac, Tristan, much appreciated!
Posted: Fri Aug 30, 2019 6:09 pm
I only wonder why you chose Aldrin rather than the better known - and slightly more pioneering - Armstrong.
Good question, David.
The key idea in the poem is that being the absolute first to experience a place, or a even a moment, a sensation, isn’t important. It’s to experience
at all that matters, through your own senses, in your own time. Hence Aldrin, not Armstrong. Plus Aldrin sounded better - assonance with ‘morning’!
Does this make sense?
Posted: Sun Oct 06, 2019 5:08 am
I'm late to this, Luke. I enjoyed it first time round and like even more, now. It's so inviting and the close is SO BRILLIANT!!
I loved that overwhelming, sudden rush of passion.