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Allegro (1)

Posted: Fri Mar 01, 2019 7:18 pm
by Macavity
I have one apprearing here in Allegro, 'Oval', which I workshopped on PG. Thanks for everyone's help.

https://www.allegropoetry.org/p/issue-2 ... -2019.html

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mac

Re: Allegro (1)

Posted: Fri Mar 01, 2019 8:31 pm
by Firebird
Many congrats Mac. I remember this poem well. I thought it was excellent when I read it here and still think so. It’s got such a strong ending.

Cheers,

Tristan

Re: Allegro (1)

Posted: Sat Mar 02, 2019 3:12 pm
by Macavity
Cheers Tristan. Hopefully the poem earned the ending :)

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mac

Re: Allegro (1)

Posted: Sat Mar 02, 2019 6:10 pm
by JJWilliamson
Remember it well, mac. Superb close. Well done indeed, sir!

Best

JJ

Re: Allegro (1)

Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2019 3:52 am
by Macavity
Thank you very much JJ. I feel the right version found its way out there in the end.

cheers

mac

Re: Allegro (1)

Posted: Mon Mar 04, 2019 11:26 am
by ray miller
Well done, mac, I don't recall seeing that poem on PG.

Re: Allegro (1)

Posted: Mon Mar 04, 2019 6:30 pm
by Macavity
Cheers Ray. It has had the PG treatment.

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mac

Re: Allegro (1)

Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2019 5:52 pm
by Antcliff
Congrats, Mac. Yes, I remember that one.