Allegro (1)
Allegro (1)
I have one apprearing here in Allegro, 'Oval', which I workshopped on PG. Thanks for everyone's help.
https://www.allegropoetry.org/p/issue-2 ... -2019.html
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mac
https://www.allegropoetry.org/p/issue-2 ... -2019.html
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mac
Re: Allegro (1)
Many congrats Mac. I remember this poem well. I thought it was excellent when I read it here and still think so. It’s got such a strong ending.
Cheers,
Tristan
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Tristan
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Cheers Tristan. Hopefully the poem earned the ending
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mac

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Remember it well, mac. Superb close. Well done indeed, sir!
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Thank you very much JJ. I feel the right version found its way out there in the end.
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Well done, mac, I don't recall seeing that poem on PG.
I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
I contemplate such bitter stuff.
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Cheers Ray. It has had the PG treatment.
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Congrats, Mac. Yes, I remember that one.
We fray into the future, rarely wrought
Save in the tapestries of afterthought.
Richard Wilbur
Save in the tapestries of afterthought.
Richard Wilbur