London Grip (1)

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London Grip (1)

Post by Macavity » Wed May 30, 2018 5:18 pm

I have one appearing here:

http://londongrip.co.uk/2018/05/london- ... 18/#p_wood

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Re: London Grip (1)

Post by Firebird » Fri Jun 08, 2018 6:16 pm

Many congrats again Mac! I remember this one and like it. London Grips a good place to be, too.

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Re: London Grip (1)

Post by Macavity » Sat Jun 09, 2018 3:18 am

Thank you very much Tristan (and for your comment on Muses).

hope all is well with you

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Re: London Grip (1)

Post by JJWilliamson » Mon Jun 25, 2018 2:20 pm

I remember this one, too, mac. She likes her bath does the lass. Phew, it's getting hot in here. :)

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Re: London Grip (1)

Post by David » Mon Jun 25, 2018 5:24 pm

Well done Mac. I remember it too. I remember taking issue with one line in it, if I remember correctly. What I can't remember is which line it was, and whether it's unchanged here. (Lot of remembering in there.)

Well done anyway. It reads very well.

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Re: London Grip (1)

Post by Macavity » Tue Jun 26, 2018 2:17 pm

Thank you both (and for comments on Jellyfish Whispers). Of course, I benefit from your nudges on many of my writing attempts - including this one, which has been picked up by Poems in the Waiting Room (New Zealand) for their publication. The power of ezine publicity!

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