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Post by JJWilliamson » Fri Mar 09, 2018 10:44 am

This one managed third place after a slight revision. Thanks to all for the help and suggestions along the way.

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Re: IPBC

Post by David » Fri Mar 09, 2018 5:08 pm

Well done, there, JJ!

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Re: IPBC

Post by Macavity » Fri Mar 09, 2018 6:12 pm

Yes, congrats too JJ!

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Re: IPBC

Post by Firebird » Fri Mar 09, 2018 6:32 pm

Many congrats JJ. I remember this one and like it.

Cheers,

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Re: IPBC

Post by JJWilliamson » Fri Mar 09, 2018 10:12 pm

Thanks, gents. I must admit I was a bit surprised when rhyming couplets received a nod.
Pleased you remembered and liked, Tristan.

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Re: IPBC

Post by Antcliff » Mon Mar 12, 2018 11:31 pm

Yeh, I liked the Jenny Wren part as well.

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Re: IPBC

Post by JJWilliamson » Tue Mar 13, 2018 11:21 am

Thanks, Seth, for reading letting me know. Appreciated.

quote="Antcliff"]Yeh, I liked the Jenny Wren part as well. ...My favourite stanza. :)

Congrats, JJ[/quote]

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