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Congrats Ray

Post by Firebird » Thu Mar 01, 2018 11:48 am

Many congrats to Ray for having a poem published in London Grip today. I really like the last two lines. A hint a dark humour there I felt. Very good.

http://londongrip.co.uk/2018/02/london- ... 18/#miller

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Post by Macavity » Thu Mar 01, 2018 3:23 pm

Well done Ray - Poetry and Cricket - a winning combo!

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Post by Antcliff » Thu Mar 01, 2018 3:38 pm

Well done Ray!

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Re: Congrats Ray

Post by David » Thu Mar 01, 2018 5:56 pm

Good stuff, Ray. Well done.

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Post by David » Thu Mar 01, 2018 6:06 pm

I like your new bio too, although I think it retains elements of the old one. Or is it changed at all?

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Post by ray miller » Fri Mar 02, 2018 11:02 am

Thanks all.
David wrote:I like your new bio too, although I think it retains elements of the old one. Or is it changed at all?
The editor suggested 2 or 3 changes to the poem, which I okayed. Not experienced that before. He's also added "describes himself as" to the bio, which is wrong, I'd never do that.
I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.

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Post by Firebird » Sat Mar 03, 2018 8:03 am

That is interesting Ray, as when had a couple accepted by the editor last year he also suggested some changes. They all related to punctuation. When I said that I was happy to make the changes he emailed me back and told me that it was a relief as not all poets weren't as compliant. So I suspect he does this quite a lot.

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Post by ray miller » Sat Mar 03, 2018 9:32 am

To be fair, the one suggestion he made was a good one, I see now. I've always wondered why London Grip? An odd name, isn't it? Did they leave an "e" off unintentionally and then thought, Oh fuck it!
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Re: Congrats Ray

Post by Firebird » Sat Mar 03, 2018 10:08 am

That just gave me good chuckle while watching my kids struggling to learn to swim.

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