Open Mouse (2)

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Open Mouse (2)

Post by Macavity » Tue Feb 27, 2018 4:53 pm

I have two appearing here...

https://theopenmouse.wordpress.com/2018 ... o-poems-2/

Thanks for all the help

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Re: Open Mouse (2)

Post by Firebird » Tue Feb 27, 2018 6:07 pm

Many Congrats, Mac! I especially like the second one, with the smile of the beach.

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Post by Macavity » Tue Feb 27, 2018 8:44 pm

Thanks Tristan. I'm pleased these were accepted by Colin since they relate to walks in West Wales.

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Re: Open Mouse (2)

Post by David » Wed Feb 28, 2018 7:34 pm

Excellent! Well done, Mac. Like Tristan, I especially like the second one. Can't beat a poem with the Clangers in it. And Cyrano.

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Re: Open Mouse (2)

Post by Macavity » Wed Feb 28, 2018 8:51 pm

David wrote:Excellent! Well done, Mac. Like Tristan, I especially like the second one. Can't beat a poem with the Clangers in it. And Cyrano.

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:lol: true

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Re: Open Mouse (2)

Post by Antcliff » Thu Mar 01, 2018 3:36 pm

The Clangers in a poem...excellent. Well done Mac! :D


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Re: Open Mouse (2)

Post by Macavity » Thu Mar 01, 2018 9:28 pm

Thanks Seth. A mac feature...a few poetic clangers in my writes ...the Society know me well :)

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Re: Open Mouse (2)

Post by ray miller » Fri Mar 02, 2018 10:56 am

Well done, mac. Colin has the rare distinction of never having rejected one of my poems....yet.
I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.

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Re: Open Mouse (2)

Post by Macavity » Sat Mar 03, 2018 5:31 am

ray miller wrote:Well done, mac. Colin has the rare distinction of never having rejected one of my poems....yet.
Thanks Ray...and yes I have!

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