Autumn Sky Poetry (1)

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Autumn Sky Poetry (1)

Post by Macavity » Thu Jan 14, 2016 6:00 pm

I have a poem in this one:

http://autumnskypoetrydaily.com/2016/01 ... d/#respond

thanks for all the help

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Re: Autumn Sky Poetry (1)

Post by David » Thu Jan 14, 2016 7:29 pm

Well done, Mac. A recent one, I see!

Great editor's note too.

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Re: Autumn Sky Poetry (1)

Post by Ros » Fri Jan 15, 2016 9:32 am

I remember liking this one. Great!

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Re: Autumn Sky Poetry (1)

Post by Firebird » Fri Jan 15, 2016 12:16 pm

I didn't see this when it was posted here, but I wish I had - I love it! It has so much great imagery fused with emotion.

Thanks for giving us the heads up.

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Re: Autumn Sky Poetry (1)

Post by Macavity » Fri Jan 15, 2016 5:59 pm

Thank you Ros, David and Tristan. Yes, an interesting feature to have some feedback from an Ed.

cheers

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Re: Autumn Sky Poetry (1)

Post by Magpie Jane » Sun Jan 17, 2016 11:20 pm

Yay, I like that one, very much.
Well done, Mac! and congrats!

Jane

PS: Good to see the Autumn Sky back again.
Everything looks better by candlelight. Everything sounds more plausible on the shortwave.

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Re: Autumn Sky Poetry (1)

Post by Macavity » Mon Jan 18, 2016 11:07 am

:) Thank you kindly MJ!

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Re: Autumn Sky Poetry (1)

Post by Antcliff » Wed Jan 20, 2016 4:22 pm

Missed this, Mac. Congrats!

Liked that refrain especially.
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Re: Autumn Sky Poetry (1)

Post by Macavity » Thu Jan 21, 2016 9:46 pm

Antcliff wrote:Missed this, Mac. Congrats!

Liked that refrain especially.
Thanks Seth!

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Re: Autumn Sky Poetry (1)

Post by JJWilliamson » Mon Jan 25, 2016 5:17 pm

I remember this one very well, Mac. Liked it then, like it now.

Well done

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Re: Autumn Sky Poetry (1)

Post by Macavity » Tue Jan 26, 2016 9:39 pm

JJWilliamson wrote:I remember this one very well, Mac. Liked it then, like it now.

Well done

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Thank you very much JJ - and for all the help!

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