Message in a Bottle (2)

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Message in a Bottle (2)

Post by Macavity » Sat Jan 02, 2016 3:37 pm

I have a couple appearing in here:

http://www.messageinabottlepoetrymagazi ... l-wood.php

thanks for the guidance as always

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Re: Message in a Bottle (2)

Post by David » Sun Jan 03, 2016 12:38 pm

Well done, Mac. I especially like that slippery "for" in Sitting On The Platform Opposite, and His Last Supper is a favourite of mine. It makes me think of Groucho Marx, for some reason. I'm not entirely sure why.

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Re: Message in a Bottle (2)

Post by Ros » Sun Jan 03, 2016 2:38 pm

Good ones, Mac. I like the daddy-long-legs.

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Re: Message in a Bottle (2)

Post by Antcliff » Mon Jan 04, 2016 12:19 pm

Congrats, Mac...yes, I remember that one about the Daddy Long Legs in the sauce.
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Re: Message in a Bottle (2)

Post by Macavity » Tue Jan 05, 2016 6:16 pm

Thank you David, Ros, and Seth. The horror that is tomato sauce!

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Re: Message in a Bottle (2)

Post by Magpie Jane » Thu Jan 07, 2016 7:54 pm

Ahhh, great good stuff there. Congrats, Mac!

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Re: Message in a Bottle (2)

Post by Macavity » Fri Jan 08, 2016 10:05 pm

Many thanks MJ!

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