Three Drops From A Cauldron (1)

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Three Drops From A Cauldron (1)

Postby Macavity » Tue Sep 12, 2017 12:52 pm

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Re: Three Drops From A Cauldron (1)

Postby NotQuiteSure » Thu Sep 14, 2017 2:03 pm

     
Congrats mac,
nice to see 'wooden hill' again, seems like forever. S3 is a creepy little gem.
Now, why is the saucepan red?

Regards, Not.
     
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Re: Three Drops From A Cauldron (1)

Postby Antcliff » Thu Sep 14, 2017 9:53 pm

Congrats. Mac. Loved that last stanza.

Seth


(By coincidence, I heard the author of the first poem...on rowan jelly...read only the other day at the recent Poetry Scotland Festival. We were all reading at the launch of an anthology.)
We fray into the future, rarely wrought
Save in the tapestries of afterthought.
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Re: Three Drops From A Cauldron (1)

Postby Macavity » Fri Sep 15, 2017 12:45 am

Thanks NQS and Seth.

Now, why is the saucepan red?


Partly a trigger/seed for elements - bloodshot/splatter - in S3.

(By coincidence, I heard the author of the first poem...on rowan jelly...read only the other day at the recent Poetry Scotland Festival. We were all reading at the launch of an anthology.)


You've been escaping island life again Seth...you need to update the bio! :)

cheers

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