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Honourable Mention IBPC: Elegy for Michael

Postby JJWilliamson » Tue Mar 28, 2017 12:27 pm

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Thanks to all for the generous help and support.

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Re: Honourable Mention IBPC: Elegy for Michael

Postby Firebird » Tue Mar 28, 2017 9:56 pm

Well done JJ. I remember this one.

Many congrats!

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Re: Honourable Mention IBPC: Elegy for Michael

Postby JJWilliamson » Wed Mar 29, 2017 9:24 pm

Firebird wrote:Well done JJ. I remember this one.

Many congrats!

Tristan


Thanks, Tristan

I'm still revising it or will be in the near future but it was nice to get the HM.

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Re: Honourable Mention IBPC: Elegy for Michael

Postby Antcliff » Thu Mar 30, 2017 7:08 pm

Congratulations, JJ

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Save in the tapestries of afterthought.
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Re: Honourable Mention IBPC: Elegy for Michael

Postby JJWilliamson » Fri Mar 31, 2017 8:52 am

Thanks, Seth

It was a tough one to call because of my closeness to the subject.
It still feels a little disjointed to me, in places.

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Re: Honourable Mention IBPC: Elegy for Michael

Postby Ros » Fri Mar 31, 2017 9:47 am

Well done, JJ. Nicely restrained.

And Fred Longworth! I remember him.

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Re: Honourable Mention IBPC: Elegy for Michael

Postby JJWilliamson » Sat Apr 01, 2017 7:07 pm

Thanks, Ros

Yes! Fred's still there, contributing on a regular basis. Where did your paths cross, I wonder. Here?

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Re: Honourable Mention IBPC: Elegy for Michael

Postby Macavity » Tue Apr 04, 2017 2:55 am

Congratulations JJ!

all the best

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Re: Honourable Mention IBPC: Elegy for Michael

Postby Ros » Tue Apr 04, 2017 9:44 am

JJWilliamson wrote:Thanks, Ros

Yes! Fred's still there, contributing on a regular basis. Where did your paths cross, I wonder. Here?

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Re: Honourable Mention IBPC: Elegy for Michael

Postby JJWilliamson » Fri Apr 07, 2017 9:23 am

Thanks, mac, especially for the help.

Thanks for getting back, Ros. Wild, eh. Interesting name. :)

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