Talking with Shadows (revision 5) was Bothering Spectres

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Re: Talking with Shadows (revision 5) was Bothering Spectres

Postby JJWilliamson » Thu Apr 26, 2018 2:33 pm

Thanks, RC

Yes, I think the revisions have helped enormously. There's always something niggling away but I'm reasonably happy with this one now.
Appreciate you looking in and taking the time to read the various alternatives. A fresh eye is always beneficial.

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