Darwin Indeed

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Darwin Indeed

Postby Nmolc » Mon Mar 05, 2018 4:37 pm

Joe Darwin the homeless man
outside Tesco,
watched him talking
on a mobile phone.

That was fourteen years ago.

Can recall when cell phones
were only used by:
well-off, well-modern
and well...

Neither of the first two were me.

serving as an extra limb;
or more useful
than some organs at least.

Left kidney, right Samsung; all good.

Expect someday
a child born,
with one attached
replacing a less vital part.

Fuck the apes! That’s evolution.
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Re: Darwin Indeed

Postby David » Mon Mar 05, 2018 7:03 pm


Read, and find enlightenment. Especially no. 1.

I think there should be a rule about using silly user names, but unfortunately there isn't.

With that caveat, welcome. I'll just lock this topic until you've paid your dues.

Catch you later.

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