Whatever Happened to Hip Hop?

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Antcliff
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Whatever Happened to Hip Hop?

Post by Antcliff » Mon Mar 13, 2017 5:57 pm

When older
she divorced Hop,
married Op.
We fray into the future, rarely wrought
Save in the tapestries of afterthought.
Richard Wilbur

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Re: Whatever Happened to Hip Hop?

Post by k-j » Tue Mar 14, 2017 1:55 am

groan...
fine words butter no parsnips

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Re: Whatever Happened to Hip Hop?

Post by ray miller » Tue Mar 14, 2017 11:32 am

I'm disappointed there's no bitch/hitch rhyme.
I'm out of faith and in my cups
I contemplate such bitter stuff.

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