Dystopia reworked

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Dystopia reworked

Postby Pauline » Mon May 22, 2017 6:53 am

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Re: Dystopia reworked

Postby Antcliff » Thu May 25, 2017 9:01 pm

Ooh, I like this, Pauline.

That stonework is super.

Lovely detail...such as the hills in the distance under the bridge.

And the back of the head of the person in the water....I take it to be that...is a nice touch.
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Re: Dystopia reworked

Postby Pauline » Mon May 29, 2017 8:24 pm

Thanks Seth.
Chuffed to bits you like it.
It's taken me a while to finish it.
I messed up on the perspective of the bridge and the thought of moving the columns
and matching the stonework filled me with dread.
I finally plucked up the courage a year and a half later
and I'm now happier with the result.
Phew.
I tried to post it with the original so the changes I've made could be compared
but I struggled to do this.
Hey ho.
Thanks for the positive comments.
It means a lot.
It makes my efforts worthwhile. :D
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Re: Dystopia reworked

Postby JJWilliamson » Wed May 31, 2017 11:10 pm

I remember this, Pauline. The stonework IS great and the scene seems clearer beyond the bridge.
It does look like the bridge to Hell. Good rapids.

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Re: Dystopia reworked

Postby Pauline » Wed Jun 14, 2017 8:00 pm

Thanks JJ :)
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