Drifted Away

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Drifted Away

Post by churinga » Tue Sep 25, 2018 10:31 pm

https://youtu.be/9u07R_lSjyI

A song I posted to YouTube.

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Re: Drifted Away

Post by Pauline » Wed Oct 17, 2018 6:51 pm

OMG!
Ross, what where you thinking when you posted this?
It's absolutely dire.
Holy jayzus.!
You've wrote this.
It's an emotional piece that means something to you.
So, why on earth did you not take the time to memorize the words
and deliver them with feeling???
It's like you can't be arsed.
You barely made eye contact .
I drifted away listening to you.
Very early on.
It was hard work making it to the end.
Sorry Ross, but singing isn't your forte.
I don't wish to be harsh but I don't remember any of the lyrics of your song
just the seriously bad delivery.
You have work to do.

Sorry, but after 108 hits someone needs to tell you.
How will you know, how will you grow.
You can do this Ross.
You can make it happen.
I'm sure you can write an opera.
Just leave the singing to the experts :D

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Re: Drifted Away

Post by churinga » Wed Oct 17, 2018 9:08 pm

Sorry you didn't like it Pauline, if it sucks it sucks.
This was recorded years ago. I'm in my 70's now, no longer creative
except for the very occasional poem.

peace and blessings

Ross

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