Haiku Train

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Re: Haiku Train

Postby sleepystupid » Mon Nov 06, 2017 6:05 pm

a grisly house
fit for beasts bothered by heat
till winter slumber
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Re: Haiku Train

Postby Walton » Wed Dec 13, 2017 6:05 am

The first post mentioned the 5-7-5 was lax, I think this is ok unless it’s become strict

till winter slumber
year earned sales enslave us
your smile worth it

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