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Unpresidented

Post by Amadis » Thu Jul 30, 2020 9:20 am

Unpresidented

November ruined The Dream
It could be how it was back then
I could make this country great again
So great, the greatest.

November made a huge mistake
it was such crooked business
and the lying fake-news press
a very big mistake, the biggest.

I coughed on Joe, without a mask
right in his face, at the debate
where I did great, so great
That should have sealed the deal.

But that woman got so many votes
Everyone knows she works for China
Someone should grab her on the vagina
too many votes, it must be so rigged,

All that protest, so horrible to see
There is no way I was out of touch
who knew black-lives could matter so much
I am in touch, the most in touch person.

It is all the fault of that China
The China Virus crashed the economy
none of this trouble is because of me
I did good, I did the best ever.

I have a new show now, a new channel
exposing the truth, no fake news
no Liberal lies, all my own views
You’ll see it is so great, the greatest.
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Re: Unpresidented

Post by Amadis » Fri Jul 31, 2020 3:30 am

Apologies to half of the USA for this gross caricature.
Written August 2020, I may have to eat these words yet :)

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Re: Unpresidented

Post by Macavity » Fri Jul 31, 2020 2:44 pm

Can Trump be caricatured? Either way some of your phrasing sounds like him! Yes, a gross rhyme like China/vagina would be him.

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Re: Unpresidented

Post by springchic1979 » Sun Aug 02, 2020 2:18 pm

Hi. I'm new here
just wanted to let you know that your 5th line has a typo

hugh = huge

Respectfully,
Y.D.S.
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Re: Unpresidented

Post by Amadis » Mon Oct 05, 2020 9:02 am

Update: 2020 October:
Looks like it was Hope Hicks who coughed on Trump.

It wouldn't be life if it wasn't unpredictable.

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