Swirls (version 2)

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Leaf

Re: Swirls (version 2)

Post by Leaf » Sun Jun 23, 2019 6:34 pm

Well, keep the original then. 'Different yolks for different folks,' as Irish Granny used to say :lol:

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Re: Swirls (version 2)

Post by Macavity » Sun Jun 23, 2019 7:28 pm

:lol: Very true Leaf!

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