Gold Stone Vibes

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Gold Stone Vibes

Post by Lovely » Tue Feb 23, 2010 5:52 pm

The living
fires abound in all the things
which lie or more around,
upon the shining earth,
and in the hidden earths
of being.

They smoulder in the smallest mote,
or glow within the poet's eye,
blaze within the heart of love,
or sparkle in the bright reflections
which all good deeds talk
about them from within
and inwards from without in sin;
along which every soul, thing, must wend its way bound
to the sorce which it fell, or arose
into the dreaming voids of this illusion
the darkness or higher sounds----------


Vibes

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Re: Gold Stone Vibes

Post by Ros » Tue Feb 23, 2010 6:36 pm

I thought you were doing a gig in Austria? Whatcha doing posting poems?
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Re: Gold Stone Vibes

Post by Lovely » Tue Feb 23, 2010 7:49 pm

It was ok, Ross. Went down well for me. It is why (I have) people beind me. Also played
"cos we were lovers" Arun. I said I would not write for a .......gold stone vibes, though

Ross It is a mere hundred mins from London, no prob for I have been doing it all of
my life


thought about you when I played ...to. She like the wind, burn me with this sun,
you like a wind in my face

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Re: Gold Stone Vibes

Post by joy » Thu Feb 25, 2010 12:04 pm

When your brain feeds on human nature the poem becomes so wonderful
So vibrant, so lovely, explain! WHY! You write -----------that excites the imagination---------
WHY! ---------------Because your body is not in the constellation of scorpius,

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Re: Gold Stone Vibes

Post by anniecat » Thu Feb 25, 2010 10:45 pm

You sometimes write realy good stuff but you also loose me a lot as with this.
Hmm........so many complicated poets on here, i read Beck was in Montreal (USA).
Joy..... you must live in a better place than me as your reality of people and life is so not like mine your thoughts and ideas are so cool, sorry i live in the blue world.
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Re: Gold Stone Vibes

Post by Emmanuel » Mon May 07, 2018 11:15 pm

This is an inspired work of poetry; however, the real author was J. Michaud PhD, who died in 1961. It was published as the epigraph to chapter six of his book The Golden Star, which is freely available to read at http://www.thegoldenstar.org/vision06.html.

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Re: Gold Stone Vibes

Post by David » Wed May 09, 2018 5:47 pm

Emmanuel wrote:This is an inspired work of poetry
No. It isn't. It really isn't. Naughty of Lovely to purloin it, nevertheless.

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Re: Gold Stone Vibes

Post by Arian » Wed May 23, 2018 7:59 pm

David wrote:
Emmanuel wrote:This is an inspired work of poetry
No. It isn't. It really isn't. Naughty of Lovely to purloin it, nevertheless.
Seconded!

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