Haiku Train

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Amadis » Sat Aug 22, 2020 12:47 am

until the rain came
Maralinga grey ash rain
there was hope of life

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Macavity » Sat Aug 22, 2020 7:27 pm

there was hope of life
with thunder they spoke and snakes
fled the waterholes

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Amadis » Sun Aug 23, 2020 2:41 am

fled the waterholes
the people and Wunambi
a curse upon all

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Macavity » Tue Aug 25, 2020 6:14 am

a curse upon all
the powerful and their kids
the powerless sang

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Amadis » Tue Aug 25, 2020 8:12 am

the powerless sang
such wondrous of human hymns
that the gods listen

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Macavity » Wed Aug 26, 2020 3:46 pm

that the gods listen
and weep a flight of feathers
birds from paradise

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Amadis » Thu Aug 27, 2020 8:41 am

birds from paradise
wings of a painters palette
beaks of bananas

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Macavity » Fri Aug 28, 2020 3:22 am

beaks of bananas
her children celebrate dad
Día de los Muertos

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Amadis » Fri Aug 28, 2020 8:39 am

Día de los Muertos
el día que mi padre visita
Pablo Escobar

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Macavity » Mon Aug 31, 2020 2:23 am

Pablo Escobar
and his legend bought smiles and
hippopotami

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Amadis » Tue Sep 01, 2020 9:00 am

hippopotami
Volkswagens of the rivers
spears within the mouth

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Macavity » Thu Sep 03, 2020 5:25 am

spears within the mouth
rush over the waterfall
cool in the blue pool

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Amadis » Fri Sep 04, 2020 9:18 am

cool in the blue pool
Cherenkov at quiet ease
thinks proton race track

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Macavity » Sun Sep 06, 2020 7:22 pm

thinks proton race track
until a sugar cube plops
into black coffee

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Amadis » Mon Sep 07, 2020 10:15 am

into black coffee
a swirl of cream stars take form
birth the milky way

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Macavity » Mon Sep 07, 2020 4:41 pm

birth the milky way
above antarctic deserts
never be alone

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Amadis » Sat Sep 12, 2020 10:15 am

never be alone
seven billion souls on Earth
find solitude peace

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Macavity » Sun Sep 13, 2020 4:55 am

find solitude peace
this night's breeze wanders blossoms
finds solitude peace

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Amadis » Mon Sep 14, 2020 10:53 am

finds solitude peace
a new world to grow into
but we split to they

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Macavity » Mon Sep 14, 2020 5:42 pm

but we split to they
winter habits store for spring
squirrels to have fun

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Amadis » Mon Sep 21, 2020 8:39 am

squirrels to have fun
an obstacle course to food
makes for online LOLs

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Re: Haiku Train

Post by Macavity » Tue Sep 22, 2020 8:34 pm

makes for online LOLs
life affirming emoji
light her attic room

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