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by Vox
Sat Nov 04, 2017 3:18 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: City Life
Replies: 9
Views: 741

Re: City Life

@ David Smedley, Pauline, Sleepystupid, The Stranger, JJWilliamson

Thank you very much for posting. You have given me great feedback.

I have so much to learn and experiment with. I will re-work my poem and post an updated version in due course.

Once again, thank you .

Vox
by Vox
Thu Nov 02, 2017 7:58 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: City Life
Replies: 9
Views: 741

Re: City Life

Luce Many thanks for posting. I really welcome your feedback and no offence taken. This was my first attempt at writing something more meaningful. I have a lot to learn and therefore have taken onboard your advice. I will revise what I've written and will post an updated version in due course. Macav...
by Vox
Wed Nov 01, 2017 6:52 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: City Life
Replies: 9
Views: 741

City Life

Hi all As I've mentioned in my introductory post, I'm new to the forum and poetry and therefore in the process of trying to educate myself via this forum and its members. City Life A sea of faces bustles past, as I stroll the avenue, Newspapers blowing in the wind telling yesterday’s news. Billboard...
by Vox
Wed Nov 01, 2017 6:44 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Three Windows
Replies: 7
Views: 746

Re: Three Windows

Very good.

I'm a newby to both the forum and poetry so will be studying the forum users work.
by Vox
Wed Nov 01, 2017 6:41 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: The Cherry Pickers (minor edits)
Replies: 18
Views: 1178

Re: The Cherry Pickers (minor edits)

Am a newby to this site and a beginner at poetry.

I'm not really in a position to offer constructive criticism as I'm still finding my way however, I enjoyed reading your poem.
by Vox
Wed Nov 01, 2017 6:35 pm
Forum: Hello, Good Evening and Welcome
Topic: Hello from the midlands
Replies: 1
Views: 1344

Hello from the midlands

Hello all. I recently stumbled across this forum; been lurking for a few days and joined up. I am a beginner at poetry, although I have over the past couple of years attempted to have a go at it. I will educate myself by reading the work of you seasoned poets. I'll also attempt at giving feedback on...