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- Sun Jun 06, 2010 10:47 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Carpel
- Replies: 7
- Views: 741
Re: Carpel
Hmm, liked this she/he, the deflowering of someone in bed, usualy refering to the women being deflowered but the stigma in he...says its about him realy and he could well be the one being shown the way...... 

- Sun Jun 06, 2010 10:28 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: every now and then
- Replies: 11
- Views: 909
Re: every now and then
I love your works my friend 

- Sun Jun 06, 2010 10:25 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: When I first saw you ...
- Replies: 6
- Views: 587
Re: When I first saw you ...
I liked this Arun, i couldn't work it out at first, with Lovelys input i understood...very good 

- Mon May 03, 2010 12:10 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Missing
- Replies: 6
- Views: 517
Re: Missing
Great this Arun 

- Fri Apr 23, 2010 3:01 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: You fool
- Replies: 14
- Views: 864
Re: You fool
Thanks and welcome Durante 

- Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:59 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: life and death
- Replies: 8
- Views: 718
Re: life and death
Hello Gavin, i think this has good potential just needs a little work as others have said, well done 

- Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:52 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: cursed
- Replies: 13
- Views: 975
Re: cursed
Aww!! Pauline this is good but sad, desperate so lonely, poor girl.....a cursed fairy tale 

- Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:46 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Drenched
- Replies: 4
- Views: 370
Re: Drenched
Arun, this is nice loved...the wind blowing it's oboe on those emerald wish-fields 

- Sun Apr 11, 2010 4:49 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: “Le poète satirique de poésie”
- Replies: 31
- Views: 2637
Re: “Le poète satirique de poésie”
Wished and not bothered looking and following this, all those big words and big things.... 

- Sat Apr 10, 2010 2:56 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: NEW FEATURE IS JOHN G MY NEXT FILM
- Replies: 7
- Views: 642
Re: NEW FEATURE IS JOHN G MY NEXT FILM
Well done



- Fri Apr 09, 2010 11:46 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Don't
- Replies: 13
- Views: 954
Re: Don't
Awww!! honesty..speak out and be free i say...... 

- Wed Apr 07, 2010 2:10 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Take away this pain
- Replies: 4
- Views: 494
- Wed Apr 07, 2010 2:07 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: I Remember Mummy Brushing My Hair
- Replies: 5
- Views: 549
Re: I Remember Mummy Brushing My Hair
Yep sad this......but thoughtful 

- Wed Apr 07, 2010 2:04 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Wallpapering
- Replies: 8
- Views: 581
Re: Wallpapering
Reads well but i'm not sure i get it, is about someone who's gone a bit nut's and locked up?
- Wed Apr 07, 2010 1:59 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: April
- Replies: 6
- Views: 510
Re: April
I thought this a lovely read..yet again thanks:D
- Tue Apr 06, 2010 8:41 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Resurgo
- Replies: 5
- Views: 414
Re: Resurgo
Arun i loved this sooo much....your brilliant..(experienced i think for this one) all the visuals are there and everything, i adore her..
And i agree with our little Elf


And i agree with our little Elf

- Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:10 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Don't
- Replies: 13
- Views: 954
Re: Don't
Ha ha i bought his album, back in the day, loved that song...lol
Have you read my not a ryhme.....transition?
Have you read my not a ryhme.....transition?
- Sun Apr 04, 2010 6:09 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Don't
- Replies: 13
- Views: 954
Re: Don't
Hello Elf and welcome, thanks for reading this, cast means throw...so don't throw your love on me. 

- Sun Apr 04, 2010 11:18 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Loving the Rituals
- Replies: 8
- Views: 707
Re: Loving the Rituals
Loads of feeling in this, nice read thanks 

- Sun Apr 04, 2010 11:15 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Chain-smoking
- Replies: 15
- Views: 985
Re: Chain-smoking
Clever this one, lot's of thoughts nice 

- Sun Apr 04, 2010 11:11 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: stop wasting time
- Replies: 8
- Views: 773
Re: stop wasting time
Well i for one kinda like this it's fun and cheeky also true, it's life, reality put into words.... 

- Fri Apr 02, 2010 1:17 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Don't
- Replies: 13
- Views: 954
Re: Don't
Smiles guys



- Thu Apr 01, 2010 11:35 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Don't
- Replies: 13
- Views: 954
Re: Don't
Ha ha you funny......but so true 

- Thu Apr 01, 2010 8:47 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Love rekindled
- Replies: 10
- Views: 829
Re: Love rekindled
Well i can't say a lot coz it's already been said, but i likes it:D
- Thu Apr 01, 2010 8:41 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Breathless
- Replies: 4
- Views: 356
Re: Breathless
Thank you Dante is it better now...... 
