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by KevJ
Thu Aug 06, 2015 3:59 pm
Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
Topic: Congrats to the Magpie/Three Drops1
Replies: 4
Views: 865

Re: Congrats to the Magpie/Three Drops1

Well done Jane. Very much enjoyed.

All the best Kev
by KevJ
Thu Aug 06, 2015 3:55 pm
Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
Topic: Dactyl/1
Replies: 6
Views: 850

Re: Dactyl/1

Well done Seth and Mac. I tried the link but was not able to find your poems.
Was keen to have a read.

All the best
Kev
by KevJ
Thu Aug 06, 2015 3:45 pm
Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
Topic: The Stare's Nest (1)
Replies: 7
Views: 1052

Re: The Stare's Nest (1)

Excellent work Mac. Well done.

Kev
by KevJ
Wed Aug 05, 2015 5:34 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Breaktime (revision)
Replies: 14
Views: 1428

Re: Breaktime (revision)

Hi Mac
You're fast becoming a master of these shorter poems.
I picture this scene very clearly and like the addition of Holm oak and levellers lane.

All the best Kev
by KevJ
Mon Jun 29, 2015 4:57 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Haiku Train
Replies: 7521
Views: 696851

Re: Haiku Train

The natural flow
Interrupted by a dam
Hydroelectric
by KevJ
Sat Jun 27, 2015 4:48 am
Forum: Poetry Exercises
Topic: New Challenge
Replies: 24
Views: 10178

Re: New Challenge

Have been struggling with this one Jane. But hope to have something soon. :roll:
by KevJ
Fri Jun 26, 2015 9:49 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Group Therapy
Replies: 14
Views: 836

Re: Group Therapy

Excellent work Ray. Enjoyed the rhymes

All the best Kev
by KevJ
Fri Jun 26, 2015 9:33 am
Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
Topic: Congrats to Ray/Clear Poetry2
Replies: 6
Views: 1430

Re: Congrats to Ray/Clear Poetry2

Well done again Ray.

Kev
by KevJ
Fri Jun 26, 2015 9:28 am
Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
Topic: Congrats Ray - The Recusant
Replies: 5
Views: 1006

Re: Congrats Ray - The Recusant

Excellent work Ray. Well done.

All the best Kev
by KevJ
Thu Jun 18, 2015 4:21 pm
Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
Topic: Three Drops From a Cauldron1
Replies: 6
Views: 1330

Re: Three Drops From a Cauldron1

Good one Seth. Much enjoyed.
All the best Kev
by KevJ
Thu Jun 18, 2015 4:10 pm
Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
Topic: Sein und Werden (1)
Replies: 7
Views: 1674

Re: Sein und Werden (1)

Well done Mac. Love the poem.
All the best
Kev
by KevJ
Sun Jun 14, 2015 10:19 am
Forum: Poetry Exercises
Topic: New Challenge
Replies: 24
Views: 10178

Re: New Challenge

That's a cracker Jane.

Kev
by KevJ
Mon Jun 01, 2015 7:59 pm
Forum: Poetry Exercises
Topic: New Challenge
Replies: 24
Views: 10178

Re: New Challenge

Will have a go at this I think.
by KevJ
Mon Jun 01, 2015 7:46 pm
Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
Topic: Streetcake Magazine
Replies: 5
Views: 932

Re: Streetcake Magazine

Love this poem MJ. Lots of interesting and curious images (banana game, the electric scorpion...).

All the best Kev
by KevJ
Mon Jun 01, 2015 7:26 pm
Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
Topic: Jellyfish Whispers
Replies: 7
Views: 1380

Re: Jellyfish Whispers

Three good one's Mac. See what you mean about bite.

All the best Kev
by KevJ
Mon Jun 01, 2015 7:20 pm
Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
Topic: Three Drops from a Cauldron
Replies: 7
Views: 1956

Re: Three Drops from a Cauldron

Well done all.

All the best Kev
by KevJ
Fri May 22, 2015 5:59 pm
Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
Topic: Shadowtrain
Replies: 14
Views: 1242

Re: Shadowtrain

Well done Tristan.

All the best
Kev
by KevJ
Fri May 22, 2015 5:48 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Brindleyplace
Replies: 9
Views: 614

Re: Brindleyplace

Thanks Mac.
Am working on the rewrite as we speak. See what you mean about myriad, but am struggling to come up with an alternative. Suggestions welcome.

Kev
by KevJ
Sat May 16, 2015 5:14 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Brindleyplace
Replies: 9
Views: 614

Re: Brindleyplace

Thanks all for the encouraging comments.
Ah! I now see what you mean by pre-loading.
Need to change that for sure.

Thanks for all the suggestions. Will ponder over the weekend with a view to posting a revision soon.

All the best
Kev
by KevJ
Fri May 15, 2015 6:46 pm
Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
Topic: poetandgeek (2)
Replies: 6
Views: 1390

Re: poetandgeek (2)

excellent double Mac. Well done.


Kev
by KevJ
Fri May 15, 2015 6:43 pm
Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
Topic: Longest Acceptance Wait Ever/1
Replies: 5
Views: 1054

Re: Longest Acceptance Wait Ever/1

Well done Seth. No I can't beat that. Like Mac I have a couple of non responses. Just goes to show you should never give up hope. :)


All the best Kev
by KevJ
Fri May 15, 2015 6:38 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Haiku Train
Replies: 7521
Views: 696851

Re: Haiku Train

London drum'n'bass
quite a hot rhythm section
dancing to the beat
by KevJ
Fri May 15, 2015 6:32 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Brindleyplace
Replies: 9
Views: 614

Brindleyplace

Revision 1 George (the breakfast barge) is long since closed. His dark, leviathan hull reflects in the mirror smooth waters of the cold canal. Above him, on the footbridge, revellers ebb and flow, in and out of the numerous bars and restaurants, acclimatising themselves, pre-loaded for the long nig...
by KevJ
Fri May 15, 2015 6:28 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Breaking the Bough (V5 much revised)
Replies: 17
Views: 965

Re: Breaking the Bough (Less trite more bite remix)

There's much to admire here Mark. Some nice rhymes, has good rhythm. Think your getting there, has potential I'd say.

Should that be "the mirror before me instead of my. Just a thought.

All the best Kev
by KevJ
Fri May 15, 2015 6:16 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: It’s Complicated
Replies: 8
Views: 565

Re: It’s Complicated

I found the bi, bi-polar bear, bonnie and clyde jekyl and hyde thing very interesting as a metaphor for multiple personalities.
Think Ray hit it on the head really :D

All the best Kev