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by gavin
Tue Jan 03, 2012 8:05 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
Topic: Walking the Planck
Replies: 23
Views: 1616

Re: Walking the Planck

stand for what yoy beleive in join the hells angles
by gavin
Tue Jan 03, 2012 7:35 am
Forum: Poetry Discussion
Topic: me and my tennure at pg
Replies: 1
Views: 622

me and my tennure at pg

You fuckwits pg are the doctors of English of English yes English. But you default your duty your shoulders are the weakest of the social Machine of beautiful poetry; If you have a look at pffa they have a weakness, there not English;- so they don’t have a Wordsworth, they don’t have the intellect o...
by gavin
Tue Jan 03, 2012 6:25 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Those words
Replies: 13
Views: 1286

Re: Those words

then brain crit his poem give him your interlect, your insight, give him your love of poetry, i'll tell you something brain in austealian humor i was working, bib and brace work, with a couple of mates on the badmanners i said fuck i know a couple poetical summri, i wonder if they could fucking surf...
by gavin
Tue Jan 03, 2012 6:06 am
Forum: Poetry Discussion
Topic: please! iam on my knees
Replies: 0
Views: 772

please! iam on my knees

I have written this, what! Humility in mind If you do not understand anything I say just ask! Poetry is my hell! It can sit me on my arse for weeks it effects my days. No my grave stone;- 6 foot under a purblind mole looking at me Is written here lays a poet who could spell, his poetry articulate. A...
by gavin
Tue Jan 03, 2012 2:45 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Those words
Replies: 13
Views: 1286

Re: Those words

sanders you used the first 7 lines of my crit in your woffle but did not use the other, your stupidity is ambition's ladder, i stand by what i say; all the new starts end up frustrated by the over-weight, one or two lines by the curates who know about poetry so generously flouted as confity crits an...
by gavin
Tue Jan 03, 2012 1:49 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: beautiful
Replies: 0
Views: 501

beautiful

Under a love story moon set on white sheets of paper coloured snow;- Herd the welcome in her step. She has become my heart every day in her favors, so overwhelmed! To this ideal tuition that bend the mind, before rarely peek a judgment upon myself down unusual passages restoring order to the swish i...
by gavin
Tue Jan 03, 2012 1:39 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Those words
Replies: 13
Views: 1286

Re: Those words

This is inexhaustible bull. Trying to change led into gold. What makes you think you’re a poet? The poem is furnished with clichés A wanker’s son turned poet. Your rhyming scream is out and forced. If you want to right poetry come up with something different; (But never, never ever, give up! Never e...
by gavin
Mon Jan 02, 2012 4:58 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: killed
Replies: 0
Views: 474

killed

I am in the middle of the bush on the bad manners, over their found a wonderful plant smoking its homely metaphors. The isolated scene an invite to camp open and free, calm. The animal’s it’s though their eyes layered into the darkness. Low air types, men with guns;- The platypus swimming in his urn...
by gavin
Mon Jan 02, 2012 4:47 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: the story of a fedgling
Replies: 6
Views: 598

Re: the story of a fedgling

i will have a look at and put your suggestions to work;
by gavin
Mon Jan 02, 2012 2:12 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: lets party
Replies: 12
Views: 895

Re: lets party

dear nash

poetry- free- for all under the name of joy---run!-
by gavin
Mon Jan 02, 2012 1:48 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: lets party
Replies: 12
Views: 895

Re: lets party

You will back yourself into a corner, you are upset because a poem of mine that you played with Was howled off the sight, you don’t give a fuck about me, I went over there to drum up support to get them over to pg, The poem became impalpable in which you had a hand in, Its not about me its about wha...
by gavin
Mon Jan 02, 2012 12:26 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: lets party
Replies: 12
Views: 895

Re: lets party

Dear nash

You hang on there; it was gannets, I thought you gave it the lofty summits
That this mysterious visitor to my shores, I put it on another poetry sight
They fucking hammered me, it taunted me, and how could you do it to me.
No you brothel bread son of a bitch; you set me up;
by gavin
Sun Jan 01, 2012 6:09 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: lets party
Replies: 12
Views: 895

Re: lets party

yes i know thanks
by gavin
Sun Jan 01, 2012 5:39 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: lets party
Replies: 12
Views: 895

Re: lets party

lets get a couple things straight rose nash rewrote a poem of mine, he refined it he cleaned it up; so i put it on another poem sight the crit from the critters was my english is my second language and told in no certain tearms to fuck off; all you people at pg have been doing is fucking with me; yo...
by gavin
Sun Jan 01, 2012 5:04 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: lets party
Replies: 12
Views: 895

Re: lets party

dear ros i shall enlighten in my perpetual struggle; bad manners, queensland disel,kingbrown,celestial wispers, the black nazarene,------ alcohol; i hope this brings you up to scratch. if you find it hard to understand me,--------you should here what the american gun lobby think about me; those clov...
by gavin
Sun Jan 01, 2012 8:44 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: the story of a fedgling
Replies: 6
Views: 598

Re: the story of a fedgling

this is just so good

i shall change and thank you very much.

i feel enlightened as you throw your good patience at my itchy scribbles;
by gavin
Sun Jan 01, 2012 8:32 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: lets party
Replies: 12
Views: 895

lets party

I was watching;- lying down
on the bad manners my fleas
in Indian file going over the
ridge of my belly, some are
wearing ray bands, some lipstick,
dock Martians, others high heels;
All were carrying alcohol, going
down to party with the crabs I
picked up from the Lolita last night.
by gavin
Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:23 am
Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
Topic: Poets’ Graves Blues Train
Replies: 455
Views: 152548

Re: Poets’ Graves Blues Train

vociferateing, vociferateing, vociferateing,

the boiler stoked vociferateing, vociferateing,

on trestle bridge over valleys vociferatering,
by gavin
Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:07 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: the story of a fedgling
Replies: 6
Views: 598

Re: the story of a fedgling

thank you very much for your crit

i through adjective at your feet.

your humble servent
by gavin
Sun Jan 01, 2012 6:39 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
Topic: Stone Face
Replies: 13
Views: 851

Re: Stone Face

what a really beautiful poem

his features bespoke himmm the son of vesuvius;

will get latter back
by gavin
Sun Jan 01, 2012 3:18 am
Forum: Poetry Discussion
Topic: ray miller
Replies: 0
Views: 652

ray miller

I am on a quest an eloquent one Its about ray miller, have a good look at his poems. Doze slowly on the hidden philanthropy, the ease and liking of natures inverse's thoughts. But his greatest quality, he is the human barometer you can see his ink rise and fall, with the outside day. with the countr...
by gavin
Sun Jan 01, 2012 2:32 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: christmas revised
Replies: 9
Views: 827

Re: christmas revised

thank you ant that is very very helpful;

missus thank you
by gavin
Sun Jan 01, 2012 2:19 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: the story of a fedgling
Replies: 6
Views: 598

the story of a fedgling

I extoll the flies! They tell me when I need too wash. And as for fiscal reforms that only happens when my thighs part accidently, the plume invades a smoking breakfast. This train is as always on time, through the tunnel of unwillingness, butt-fucked, in two words. But the affairs of self-destructi...
by gavin
Sun Jan 01, 2012 2:09 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
Topic: Walking the Planck
Replies: 23
Views: 1616

Re: Walking the Planck

I will be here and you’ll be there. The day hot, the air sticky. It’s like swimming in a jar of honey since I’ve been on pg. While each of you in out burst of adoration in some obscure article, you are published! The pg frontline irritated by their battle to be published as a stand alone book; Did a...
by gavin
Sat Dec 31, 2011 3:28 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: christmas revised
Replies: 9
Views: 827

Re: christmas

thanks dragon fly

your comments are very very help full to me climbing poetrys ladder getting pissed and falling off again.